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Friday 19 October 2012

My Narrative Story


Last year on halloween a brother and sister went trick or treating and they only had one bucket between them. When they got back home they started to have a fight over the bucket full of lollies. One of them was dressed up in a ninja costume and the sister was dressed up as a clown. The brother said angrily “I will use my weapons on you” but he had none. The sister said “You have none” and then the little brother shouted out loudly “GIVE THE BUCKET TO ME”. Then their mum came and took it off them and ate all of the lollies and sent the brother and sister to their room.

Tuesday 16 October 2012

my new mexico story


Along time ago in New Mexico there was a flood, a lot of kids were playing in a flood causing trouble amongst houses and splashing water onto clothes.
There was a kid whose name was Jamain. He climbed up to the very top because his friend dared him to do it. so he jumped off the roof because he wanted to be the man.
He landed on his stomach he tried to get up but he couldn't.  Water was covering his face. His upper body was pounding with pain and couldn't breath that much. A random friend reached out to his hand and took him to his brother Steven Fox

Steven Fox took him to the hospital because he had been injured. When he opened his eye his mum was so enthusiastic because Jamain was still alive that was good thing.
When they got back  stevens back side was red as superman's cape. After that the flood dried up everyone took the stuff down and put them back where they were. All the kids were bored without a  water anywhere to be seen.

Jamain came back home he was pleased to see his friends and family. his friends
ran and up to jamain and hugged him to heaven.