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Friday 23 November 2012

My manaiakalani story


My netbook is awesome!!! Yesterday the Minister of Education came to my school. The minister of education was talking about Manaiakalani. When the Minister of Education finished talking about Manaiakalani and our wireless network, we all prayed.
After we prayed mr Pat Sneddon talked about Manaiakalani. When Mr Pat Sneddon was done, my principal came and told us to thank our mum. So thank you Mum for paying for my netbook.

Thursday 15 November 2012

Manaiakalani Film Festival



This week was the film festival. Me and my school went to the Manaiakalani Film Festival at Hoyts cinemas. We all went on different buses. When we arrived, we all went in the theatre. Two of them at the film festival were from my class. I thought it was cool.

Tuesday 13 November 2012

My Scary Doll Story


     The girl that gets turned into a doll.
One day a little girl was skipping down a snowy footpath, she made it to her favorite doll shop. She wrote her name onto the blackboard Alma perfect her name is Alma.

She looked behind her because there was a sound of cogs. And there was a doll that looked like Alma. Wanted that doll so she walked to the door and tried to open it.


The door wasn't opening then she walked away and threw a snowball at the door window. Then the door opened then she walked into the shop slowly and the doll that looked like her went on the shelf Alma bumped into a doll that was on a bike. It looked like it was trying to escape out of the shop until the door closed.

The doll on the bike with rusty chains, smacked its head onto the wooden door over and over again in desperation.


When Alma looked up again, her doll that looked like her had disappeared somewhere. She was looking around where the doll had last been seen but it wasn't there. When Alma looked up to a shelf filled with dolls she saw the doll she was looking for then started to climb up to the doll.

She saw two girl dolls moving their eyes looking at her. Alma had found what she was looking for. The doll that looked like Alma wasn’t moving its eyes and Alma was still trying to get the doll by climbing on the shelves filled with dolls.

The doll that looked like her kept on disappearing from one shelf to another. But Alma didn’t care she was careless in that doll shop.


Alma finally climbed up to the top shelf she touched the doll’s chest then suddenly Alma turned into a doll she couldn’t move at all, all she could do is move her eyes side to side.

THE END!!!

Friday 2 November 2012

Part of Charlie and the chocolate factory rettel


There was a boy called Charlie one day he was walking home back from school. While he was walking home something shiny caught his eye. It was a $1 coin he picked it up carefully then he flung all of the dirt off it.


After cleaning the coin he went into a shop. He walked to the counter then the shopkeeper asked what chocolate bar charlie wanted then charlie carefully picked. He picked willy wonkas scrumdidlyumptious.


After he ripped the wrapper off quickly then he gave the coin to the man at the counter. When he ate the chocolate the man at the counter gave Charlie some change. Charlie just had enough money for a regular wonka chocolate bar.
Charlie said “I’ll buy a regular wonka bar this time for my grandpa Joe” “Ok” the shop keeper said. Charlie gave the rest of his change to the Shopkeeper then left. When charlie left he saw a swarm of people at the newspaper cart. One of the people at the newspaper cart was talking about the guy who

had a fake golden ticket.

When Charlie heard the man who was talking about the guy who had the fake golden ticket he said nothing. Charlie walked away and carefully took off the wrapper and saw a glimpse of gold. He closed the wrapper he was over excited then he ripped the silver wrapper off and dropped the bar of chocolate and got the last golden ticket out. When he pulled out the last golden ticket out a greedy old lady grabbed him by the arm and shouted out “Hey this kid found the ticket he found the last golden ticket”, every crowded around him and some man told him to run all the way home and not stop and Charlie ran out and ran all the way home.