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Friday 2 November 2012

Part of Charlie and the chocolate factory rettel


There was a boy called Charlie one day he was walking home back from school. While he was walking home something shiny caught his eye. It was a $1 coin he picked it up carefully then he flung all of the dirt off it.


After cleaning the coin he went into a shop. He walked to the counter then the shopkeeper asked what chocolate bar charlie wanted then charlie carefully picked. He picked willy wonkas scrumdidlyumptious.


After he ripped the wrapper off quickly then he gave the coin to the man at the counter. When he ate the chocolate the man at the counter gave Charlie some change. Charlie just had enough money for a regular wonka chocolate bar.
Charlie said “I’ll buy a regular wonka bar this time for my grandpa Joe” “Ok” the shop keeper said. Charlie gave the rest of his change to the Shopkeeper then left. When charlie left he saw a swarm of people at the newspaper cart. One of the people at the newspaper cart was talking about the guy who

had a fake golden ticket.

When Charlie heard the man who was talking about the guy who had the fake golden ticket he said nothing. Charlie walked away and carefully took off the wrapper and saw a glimpse of gold. He closed the wrapper he was over excited then he ripped the silver wrapper off and dropped the bar of chocolate and got the last golden ticket out. When he pulled out the last golden ticket out a greedy old lady grabbed him by the arm and shouted out “Hey this kid found the ticket he found the last golden ticket”, every crowded around him and some man told him to run all the way home and not stop and Charlie ran out and ran all the way home.

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