Monday, 10 September 2012
Tommy Kapai Wilson
Wating for a man called Tommy Kapai wilson he is a famous man who writes books. My whole school saw him at asembly he told us a story about him. When he was a little kid his teacher told him he had a gift. She said that his gift was being good at writing he said will I go around the world she said yes he said will I be rich and famous she said yes he said cool.
His farther was in a war he came back home and he thought that violense and wars are dumb. And when Tommy grew up he went to america and met Gorege Harison. He was in the beatles and they both had a talk. Then Tommy started working for famous rich people like the crown prince that gave him a ferrari.
Then two weeks later he started calling him bro then he met a king every one called him hinis then two weeks later he called the king mate. Tommy and another guy worked on a giant boat some famous people owned it for two weeks a year then the rest of the time it was theres. Then he thought about his family then came back to New Zealand and that was the end of his story. Then he showed us a story about prinses Diana then asembly was over.
Tuesday, 4 September 2012
Tyrone and Brandon Paragraph 1 Aldora's Cross Country
Today we practiced re-crafting a peace of writing. The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.
“Cross country, Cross country” is the worst event ever. I would never dream about cross country. Today is cross country and I am not feeling good. But I just want to support my team TE ARAWA. “GO TE ARAWA” I said quietly to myself.
Cross country “why me?” I sat nervously. I didn’t know if I could win or if I might fall in the mud. I took a big breath and remembered the race from last year. I then knew what my goals were I just hope I would win.
Cross country “why me?” I sat nervously. I didn’t know if I could win or if I might fall in the mud. I took a big breath and remembered the race from last year. I then knew what my goals were I just hope I would win.
Tuesday, 28 August 2012
Tyrone's Liu Xiang story
In the 2004 olympics I won the 110m hurdles. In the 2008 olympics I competed again but I lost because I went in to a obstacle my country thought I will win but I lost. In the 2012 London olympics my country counted on me so I competed again my whole country was watching.
Then we all started running then I jumped and hit my leg. I felt embarrassed and the person at the back of me stopped and I was disappointed then everyone else fell over. I got up then hopped away into a tunnel then some people said I was going the wrong way I said I am retired, then he went to the last hurdle and kissed it.
After I kissed it some people from a different team came to help me. That was the olympic spirit my leg was sore that I couldn't walk on it any more.
Then we all started running then I jumped and hit my leg. I felt embarrassed and the person at the back of me stopped and I was disappointed then everyone else fell over. I got up then hopped away into a tunnel then some people said I was going the wrong way I said I am retired, then he went to the last hurdle and kissed it.
After I kissed it some people from a different team came to help me. That was the olympic spirit my leg was sore that I couldn't walk on it any more.
Thursday, 23 August 2012
Cross Country 2012
Jogging down to the reserve we all walked to the starting line at the reserve. The 10 and 9 year old boys were ready to sprint all the way to tamaki college and all the way back to Pt -England. As Mr Burt said on your marks get set GO as I ran towards the bridge I was hoping I would came first in the finals. If I did come first I will be proud of myself but I didn't and I felt disappointed about my self.
As I was running through the bushes I was going to fall down. On slippery bridge and into the water. Well I was running down the bush it felt really exhausted. I was almost at the finished line and I felt so tired!!! Finally I crossed the finished line and everyone was cheering me on.
We were washing our legs because our legs were dirty because of the mud. Looking at all that water made me so thirsty. When I was done wishing the mud off my legs I quickly had the biggest drink of water ever.Then we sat down on the ground and watch every one that had to race and after that we went to room 17 because Miss King was still doing the cross country then she came and the we went home.
As I was running through the bushes I was going to fall down. On slippery bridge and into the water. Well I was running down the bush it felt really exhausted. I was almost at the finished line and I felt so tired!!! Finally I crossed the finished line and everyone was cheering me on.
We were washing our legs because our legs were dirty because of the mud. Looking at all that water made me so thirsty. When I was done wishing the mud off my legs I quickly had the biggest drink of water ever.Then we sat down on the ground and watch every one that had to race and after that we went to room 17 because Miss King was still doing the cross country then she came and the we went home.
Wednesday, 22 August 2012
Thursday, 9 August 2012
Tyrone's Cross Country Training
Every afternoon at 2 : 30 p.m we go to the courts to do cross country. As we get up to run I feel fitter and fitter When mr Marks yells out year five boys year five boys run all the way down to the reserve.
As I run i'm hating every minute and I start thinking how much longer. By the time I got to mr Sommerville I was wishing for rain. He told everyone that they were doing a good job.
Not long after that I started walking.
When everyone started passing me I started running I got up to my teacher mrs King she tells us to hurry up. I didn’t want to upset my teacher so I started running a little faster.
I was almost there but I got tired so I started walking with my friend Frank. We started talking then we started jogging we got to the end. We all had to walk in a giant square after that we done stretches when we finished it was time to get our bags and go home.
As I run i'm hating every minute and I start thinking how much longer. By the time I got to mr Sommerville I was wishing for rain. He told everyone that they were doing a good job.
Not long after that I started walking.
When everyone started passing me I started running I got up to my teacher mrs King she tells us to hurry up. I didn’t want to upset my teacher so I started running a little faster.
I was almost there but I got tired so I started walking with my friend Frank. We started talking then we started jogging we got to the end. We all had to walk in a giant square after that we done stretches when we finished it was time to get our bags and go home.
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