Today we practiced re-crafting a peace of writing. The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.
“Cross country, Cross country” is the worst event ever. I would never dream about cross country. Today is cross country and I am not feeling good. But I just want to support my team TE ARAWA. “GO TE ARAWA” I said quietly to myself.
Cross country “why me?” I sat nervously. I didn’t know if I could win or if I might fall in the mud. I took a big breath and remembered the race from last year. I then knew what my goals were I just hope I would win.
Cross country “why me?” I sat nervously. I didn’t know if I could win or if I might fall in the mud. I took a big breath and remembered the race from last year. I then knew what my goals were I just hope I would win.
1 comment:
Hey Tyrone
Cool blog post. I like it because it has cool sentence beginnings
Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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